Sorry to respectfully disagree with you, but personally I liked it. Could have given more time to Snape, methinks, but still not bad.
MacGuffins? Happily ever after? Good god sister, what book series did you think you were reading? There's no way on earth this could be like Clerks with the down endings.
As for bad writing and pacing, I didn't notice it, least on the first read through, and usually that kind of thing grabs me by the throat and makes me put the book down. So eh, again I just likes it.
Although, I can't help but think that they would have had an easier time fighting death eaters if one of the good guys had a wand made by Heckler and Koch or the Colt Manufacturing Company, but I've watched too many John Woo movies.
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Date: 2007-07-22 02:43 am (UTC)MacGuffins? Happily ever after? Good god sister, what book series did you think you were reading? There's no way on earth this could be like Clerks with the down endings.
As for bad writing and pacing, I didn't notice it, least on the first read through, and usually that kind of thing grabs me by the throat and makes me put the book down. So eh, again I just likes it.
Although, I can't help but think that they would have had an easier time fighting death eaters if one of the good guys had a wand made by Heckler and Koch or the Colt Manufacturing Company, but I've watched too many John Woo movies.