It just gets worse

[thessalian]

Monica and Violet are still out today, and there's no one to cover them. Apparently there are no temps available and there are ten people in the department out sick. You should see Violet's office -- it's chaos. Then again, mine's no better. It's going to be a very, very long day. Or just a very short but very hectic one.

Help?

Comments

[thessalian.livejournal.com]

*snicker*

Some of that really doesn't scan, but for an off-the-cuff effort, not bad at all. Though I'd turn that fourth-to-last and third-to-last lines to read "I'll murder them all and then laugh as they choke and seize / except the ones out due to being plagued with disease". A little bit rough but at least it generally follows the rhythm. ^_^

[nightskywarlock.livejournal.com]

"i'll murder them all, and make it not painless nor quick / except for the ones who happened to ring in sick"?

something. i'm high on life, and by high on life, i mean low on sleep.

[thessalian.livejournal.com]

Hey, at least it has amusement value. Go get some rest, you daft bugger.